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Valentine’s Day seeped with love and romance
Swearing allegiance to one met by chance
Hearts intertwined in a passionate dance
All in the hopes of a sexual advance
What is this stupidity tied with a bow?
Flowers and candies laid out in a row
Flashing and prancing in a ridiculous show
Twirling in simple false flattery’s glow
What is this silliness drenched in such fog?
Smoke covered lies in a sensational smog
Little hearts beating in a self-delusional bog
Save yourself the heart-ache and just get a dog
Bah Humbug :)
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Pineapplecoker Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I was cat smirking halfway through this one
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016
A dog can be a lot of fun,
a friend with whom to play
but in the darkness as you lay,
a puppy just can't get it done.
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
A lover can be a loaded gun,
an enemy who will make you pay
but a dog's loyalty never goes away
and it's bite cannot be out-run


OMG MOAR POEMS! 
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016
That is why one takes love declarations,
with a bit of salt in one's libations
and something loud close to hand,
for if love turns into a last stand.

If it does, the killin' may chill,
even so, the fuckin' will thrill,
sooner or later, we all pay the bill,
so live as you wish and do as you will.


:) You are always a pleasure.
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
The enjoyment is mutual :) cheers!
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2016
:)
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OreoApocalypse Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha xD what if I don't want a dog either? This is cute. I'm not one for traditional Valentine's day gifts and all that...what's the word I'm looking for... Ima go with hoopla xD yeah, that seems right. I'd rather have a gift that's going to last, and just spend as much time as possible with that special person, cause memories last a lot longer than chocolate and flowers :p but then again, something could go bad and then it wouldn't be good memories. I can't say I miss celebrating it, but I do miss having that person to celebrate it with.
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
"Hoopla"  is the perfect word :)
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OreoApocalypse Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought so xD
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Indigo-Moon-Shadow Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
"just get a dog" YEEEESSSSS XD
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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7R41N3D3RR0R157 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Haaa!
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Woohooooo! 
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Candyhouse408 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This poem is very true. I especially love how creative it is!
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) 
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Candyhouse408 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome, nice work!
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