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Lady Raven stands on the roof top ledge
Black gleaming eyes peering over the edge
Beautiful dusky feathers are tinged with red
And bones show through where she has bled
Her wings are broken and useless now
From stones and rocks thrown at her brow
Just some wicked child's ruthless game
Who taught such a thing should die of shame
Somehow she manages to still stand tall
Upon the edge of this man-made wall
Lady Raven then jumps into the air
And spreads her broken wings with flair
She plummets down towards the earth
Slightly gliding on the wind's wide berth
Broken body meets soil in a cry of pain
Then there is nothing to feel again
Although Lady Raven was driven to die
For one last time she was able to fly
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Life should not be TAKEN for granted
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~IceLuxray Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful n sad <3
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*InsanityAdjuster Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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Mood: dA Love ~ForeverAMasquerade Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely fantastic! <3
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*InsanityAdjuster Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :D
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Mood: Sentimental ~Taiwanesedreamer Feb 28, 2013   General Artist
Its a great poem. Epic really.
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*InsanityAdjuster Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :) :hug:
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~Carolyn7727 Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
I love the rhyme and meter, not to mention the imagery and message :) Great job
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*InsanityAdjuster Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :hug:
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~ninjakookies Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very good. Keep up the good work....
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*InsanityAdjuster Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :D :hug:
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