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Kneeling before the alter of pain
She bows her head yet once again
Reaching out hands that tremble so
There is no choice but to let it go
No tears fall from her dark blue eyes
No sound is heard for she swallows her cries
Clenching her fists until her palms do bleed
The cold alter from these red raindrops feed
Unloved is all she has ever known
This alter of pain is her only home
Palms now held up to the uncaring sky
She releases her dreams and lets them fly
Empty and cold she turns and walks away
Her dreams have always been doomed anyway
Sometimes it is better not to dream
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PurpleAnimeArtFreak Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
They're all just so awesome lately :D
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug: awwww
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Skratotriasok Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
not, bad, many poems are not pleasant to read. This one is, for your style it would suit to make longer more epic poem, in my opinion. good work
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!! :hug: :D
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Shadow-Hacker Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If this was about a guy instead of a girl then I would know without a shadow of doubt that this poem was inspired by my life.
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InsanityAdjuster Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry to hear that...welcome to my world :hug:
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